Re: James Jadoo

[Teacher Winget]

A storm is coming 𝗰𝗮𝗺𝗲 to the village.

People go 𝗽𝗲𝗼𝗽𝗹𝗲 𝘄𝗲𝗻𝘁 to school.

Jadoo plays 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗲𝗱 there with Minji, Doldol, and Yoonseok.

But it was in front of the tent, and when Eunhi got angry... 𝗧𝗵𝗲𝘆 𝘄𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗶𝗻 𝗳𝗿𝗼𝗻𝘁 𝗼𝗳 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘁𝗲𝗻𝘁, 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗘𝘂𝗻𝗵𝗲𝗲 𝗴𝗼𝘁 𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗿𝘆.

Then the light went out.

But Jadoo's mom left the gold toad at home.

As the light came on, Jadoo went outside.

Jadoo's mom and dad follow 𝗳𝗼𝗹𝗹𝗼𝘄𝗲𝗱 her out, but it was too late.

This story was sad 𝗺𝗮𝗱𝗲 𝗺𝗲 𝘀𝗮𝗱.

Score: A-

Tips)
• 과거 이야기이므로 came, went, played, followed처럼 과거형을 써요.
• “made me sad”는 “나를 슬프게 했다”라는 뜻이에요.
• “Eunhee” 이름 철자를 다시 확인해 보세요.
• 마지막에 Jadoo가 어떻게 되었는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 이야기가 더 완성돼요!