The title of this story is "The Rocky Road to Successful "The Rocky Road to Success."** This is the story of Beethoven, Vincent van Gogh, J.K. Rowling, and Michael Jordan, who overcame difficulties. From reading this story, I learned that dreams do not come true without effort. Especially, Beethoven's story was the most interesting. Beethoven is one of my favorite musicians. Ever since I was young, I have been moved by Beethoven's stories. It looked was really cool to see him working hard to compose music even he though he was deaf. Like the four people in this story, I should not give up.
Score: B+
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