This story is helding holds a very important thing lesson in our life. We usually focus on their accomplishments when we look at successful people. History's greatest people also have have also struggled to succeed , however. Beethoven lost his hearing, but he still composed various beautiful musics pieces of music. Otherwise Likewise, Michael Jordon Jordan is the best basket basketball player of all time. Despite the setbacks and rejecting being rejected from his high basketball school basketball team, finally he succeed he finally succeeded after his numerous efforts. I can't forget his saying, "I've failed over and over and over again in my life. And that is why I succeed." I hope you don't forget nobody can success at once remember that nobody can succeed at once.
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