Re: 1c 202 Bella

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Milly and Molly thought all hens had feathers.
One day they found a hen without her any feathers.
But her name is was Feather.
So they think thought they need talk needed to talk to Farmer Hegarty.
"Will Feather grow feather feathers again?" asked Milly.
"With food and freedom, she will," said Farmer Hegarty.
so So they made a nest of straw.
One day Feather's feathers grew back.
And Feather lay laid an egg in her nest.
They think thought Feather found freedom.

Score: Ao

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Tips)

• "without her feathers"보다는 "without any feathers"가 더 자연스러워요.

• 이야기 전체가 과거이니까 "is" → "was", "think" → "thought"처럼 과거형을 써야 해요.

• "need talk"는 틀렸어요. "needed to talk"처럼 to를 써줘야 해요.

• "grow feather"는 "feathers"처럼 복수형으로 써야 자연스러워요.

• "lay egg"는 "laid an egg"처럼 과거형 + 관사를 써야 해요.

• 첫 글자는 항상 대문자로 시작해요! 문장 시작할 때 "so"는 "So"로 고쳐야 해요.