This stoey 𝗌𝗍𝗈𝗋𝗒 was about Jadoo's trapping 𝗴𝗲𝘁𝘁𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘀𝘁𝘂𝗰𝗸.
Jadoo was heart on the brow 𝗵𝘂𝗿𝘁 𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗯𝗿𝗼𝘄.
At the play ground,Jadoo was trapping at banister 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗴𝗿𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗱, 𝗝𝗮𝗱𝗼𝗼 𝗴𝗼𝘁 𝘀𝘁𝘂𝗰𝗸 𝗶𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗯𝗮𝗻𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗿.
Jadoo was Jadoo was trapping 𝗴𝗼𝘁 𝘀𝘁𝘂𝗰𝗸 on 𝗮𝘁 dinner time.
Jadoo's familly was find 𝗳𝗮𝗺𝗶𝗹𝘆 𝗳𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗱 her.
Jadoo was find 𝘄𝗮𝘀 𝗳𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗱.
I think this story was fun.
Score: B+
Tips)
• “got stuck”은 “끼었다”라는 뜻이에요.
• “found”는 “find”의 과거형이에요.
• “family”와 “story” 철자를 다시 연습해 보세요.
• Jadoo가 어떻게 구출되었는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!
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