Re: James Jadoo

[Teacher Winget]

The 𝗝𝗮𝗱𝗼𝗼 fell off the swing.

Her mother healed the Jadoo 𝗵𝗲𝗹𝗽𝗲𝗱 𝗝𝗮𝗱𝗼𝗼.

She was left alone at the playground.

She played with Doldol.

Some children drew Jadoo’s face like a puppy’s.

Doldol ate ribs at home.

He remembered Jadoo is got caught 𝗝𝗮𝗱𝗼𝗼 𝘄𝗮𝘀 𝘀𝘁𝘂𝗰𝗸.

He found Jadoo**,** but Jadoo was angry.

Score: B-

Tips)
• “helped”는 “도와주었다”라는 뜻이에요.
• “was stuck”은 “끼어 있었다”라는 뜻이에요.
• 문장을 연결할 때 쉼표(,)를 쓰면 더 자연스러워요.
• 마지막에 Jadoo가 왜 화가 났는지 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!

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