<p style="text-align: left;">This story title is Caillou's All alone. Caillou wanted to play with mom, but mom is very busy. Mom says, "Go to the dad."<br>Caillou goes to dad. Dad, fix a wash machine, so dad is very busy too. And dad says, "Go to the grandma." Caillou goes to grandma. Grandma was putting Raise to sleep, so Grandma was busy, too. Caillou play with his doll. Mom called Caillou for a snack, but Caillou didn't hear. So the story ends with Mom opening Caillou's door. After reading this book, I thought Caillou's family was just as busy as my family. </p>
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첫댓글This story's (story) title is "Caillou's All Alone."
Caillou wanted to play with (mom, but mom is very busy.) Mom, but Mom is very busy. Mom says, "Go to the dad." (Mom says, "Go to the dad.")
Caillou goes to Dad. Dad (, fix a wash machine, so dad is very busy too. And dad says, "Go to the grandma.") Dad is fixing the washing machine, so Dad is very busy too. Dad says, "Go to Grandma."
Caillou goes to grandma. Grandma was putting (Raise) Rosie to sleep, so Grandma was busy, too. So Caillou (play) plays with his doll.
첫댓글 This story's (story) title is "Caillou's All Alone."
Caillou wanted to play with (mom, but mom is very busy.) Mom, but Mom is very busy. Mom says, "Go to the dad." (Mom says, "Go to the dad.")
Caillou goes to Dad. Dad (, fix a wash machine, so dad is very busy too. And dad says, "Go to the grandma.") Dad is fixing the washing machine, so Dad is very busy too. Dad says, "Go to Grandma."
Caillou goes to grandma. Grandma was putting (Raise) Rosie to sleep, so Grandma was busy, too. So Caillou (play) plays with his doll.
Mom called Caillou for a snack, but Caillou didn't hear. So the story ends with Mom opening Caillou's door.
After reading this book, I thought Caillou's family was just as busy as my family.
Teacher's comments
You wrote quite well but I noticed some grammar you have never learned. It is important that you write your own summery!
Also I felt sad your family is so busy like Calliou.