Re: Max&Ruby-Hyeonghu

[Teacher1]

The title of the story “Surprise Ruby "Surprise Ruby".

The story starts with Max inside Ruby’room s room.

Then, Max catched caught Ruby’s crown with a toy and said, "Surprise!"

And Max made a cake with dirt.

Max went to the playground, and Ruby followed him.

Max and Ruby played hide and sick seek.

Ruby kept looking for Max and then she found him.

And Max and Ruby took down a ride on the slide.

Max played kidding around with Ruby’s crown.

When Ruby got home, her friends surprised her.

Score: C+

Tips)

1. "Max catched Ruby’s crown" → "Max caught Ruby’s crown"
   👉 "catch"의 과거형은 "caught"예요!
2. "hide and sick" → "hide and seek"
   👉 "hide and seek"이 올바른 표현이에요!
3. "Max and Ruby took down the slide" → "Max and Ruby took a ride on the slide"
   👉 "take down"은 "내려놓다"라는 뜻이라 어색해요. "take a ride on"이 더 자연스러워요!
4. "Max played kidding with Ruby’s crown" → "Max played around with Ruby’s crown"
   👉 "kidding"은 "농담하다"라는 뜻이므로 문맥상 "played around"이 더 맞아요!
5. "Max inside Ruby’room" → "Max inside Ruby’s room"
   👉 "Ruby's"처럼 소유격을 올바르게 써야 해요!