Re: 2A 025 (Luna)

[Sub Tutor]

The title of this book is "The Bermuda Triangle". Did you wonder if the Bermuda Triangle is real or a myth? Today, I will teach you if the Bermuda Triangle is real or a myth. The Bermuda Triangle is located in a triangular section between Miami, Puerto Rico, and Bermuda. Here, Christopher Columbus made his first voyage. In March of 1918, the Cyclops vanished without even sending an SOS call, but ̶n̶o̶w̶o̶n̶e̶ no one ̶d̶i̶d̶ ̶n̶o̶t̶ has find it today. In another case, Fl̶i̶g̶h̶t̶ Flight 19, a training mission that included five Navy planes**, disappeared**. ̶B̶u̶t̶ The communication was lost and the flight never came back. Some people claim bad weather and human mistakes are to blame**.** Nobody can't deny that the Bermuda Triangle is one of the most interesting areas in the world. I think this story is interesting. And I think the Bermuda Triangle is real. Because, ̶T̶h̶e̶ the space is very huge so maybe aliens ̶w̶e̶r̶e̶ might exist.

Grade: B+

Tips)

1. Add more details about Christopher Columbus's voyage.
2. Explain what the Cyclops was (a ship).
3. Give examples of bad weather or human mistakes that could explain disappearances.
4. Think about other possible explanations besides aliens.
5. Share why you find the Bermuda Triangle interesting.