<Choose a person or people you admire and explain why?>
I choose Khanna teacher!
teacher Khanna
It's because she always smlie!
smile
I respect her smile face!
I respect her smiley face and she always
explains many thing that I don't know!
things
She is so passionate to teach me!
She is so passionate in teaching me
So I think that Khanna teacher is my admire
person!
So, I think that teacher Khanna is the person I admire.
PS: I respect you ♡
Comments:
Good day Catherine! Your writing today is very inspiring. There are few changes. So,Kindly re-che
ck it.First;Please, Don't forget to use comma's after; to separate independent clauses when the
y are joined by any of these seven coordinating conjunctions: and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet.
Second, Please be careful with spellings and grammars; I respect her smile face: In this sentence you have to use adjective (smiley) instead of verb (Smile). Lastly, She is so passionate to teach me! this sentence is correct but you have to use the present continous tense( teaching) because teacher Khanna is still your teacher.
Thank You!
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