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<p style="text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: 14pt;"><Choose a person or people you admire and explain why?></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><span style="font-size: 18pt;">I choose </span><u><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">Khanna teacher</span></strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">!</span></u></span></p><p style="margin-left: 12em;"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><strong><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">teacher </span></strong><strong><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">Khanna </span></strong></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><span style="font-size: 18pt;">It's be</span><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><span style="font-size: 18pt;">cause she always </span><u><span style="font-size: 18pt;">smlie!</span></u></span></span></p><p style="margin-left: 32em;"><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-size: 24pt;">smile</span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;">I respect her smile face!</span></p><p><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">I respect her smiley face</span></span> <span style="font-size: 18pt;">and she always </span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;">explains many </span><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><u><span style="font-size: 18pt;">thing</span></u><span style="font-size: 18pt;"> that I don't know!</span></span></span></p><p style="margin-left: 18em;"><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);">things</span> </span></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font size="6"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><u><span style="font-size: 18pt;">She is so passionate to teach me!</span></u></span></font></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font size="6"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font size="6"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">She is so passionate</span> in</span><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0);"> teaching <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0);">me</span></span></span></font></span></span></font></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font size="6"><span style="font-size: 18pt;">So I think that Khanna teacher is my admire </span></font></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font size="6"><span style="font-size: 18pt;">person!</span></font></span></p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font size="6"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font size="6"><span style="color: rgb(255, 0, 0); font-size: 24pt;">So, I think that teacher Khanna is the person I admire.</span></font></span></p></span><p><br></p></font><p><br></p></span><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font size="6"><span style="font-size: 18pt;">PS: I respect you ♡</span></font></span></p><p><br></p><p><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;">Comments:</span></p><p><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;"><br></span></p><p style="line-height: 0.8;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;">Good day Catherine! Your writing today is very inspiring. There are few changes. So,Kindly re-che</span></p><p style="line-height: 0.8;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;"><br></span></p><p style="line-height: 0.8;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;">ck it.First;Please, Don't forget to use comma's after; to separate independent clauses when the</span></p><p style="line-height: 0.8;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;"><br></span></p><p style="line-height: 0.8;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;">y are joined by any of these seven coordinating conjunctions: <em>and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet.</em></span></p><p style="line-height: 0.8;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;"><em>Second, Please be careful with spellings and grammars; </em><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><font color="#474253"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;">I respect her smile face: In this sentence you have to use adjective (smiley) instead of verb (Smile). Lastly, <span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font color="#474253" size="6"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255);">She is so passionate to teach me! this sentence is correct but you have to use the present continous tense(</span><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255);"> teaching) because teacher Khanna is still your teacher.</span></span></span></font></span></span></font></span></span></p><p style="line-height: 0.8;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><font color="#474253"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font color="#474253" size="6"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255);"><br></span></span></span></font></span></span></font></span></span></p><p style="line-height: 0.8;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><font color="#474253"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255); font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><font color="#474253" size="6"><span style="font-size: 24pt;"><span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="color: rgb(9, 0, 255);">Thank You!</span></span></span></font></span></span></font></span></span><br></p>
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