Re: James 자두

[Teacher Winget]

Mom told me 𝗝𝗮𝗱𝗼𝗼 to go to the market and come back.

But the TV was showing the 𝗮 program Jadoo likes.

When I 𝗝𝗮𝗱𝗼𝗼 went to the supermarket, the door was closed**,** and it was even raining.

It was evening after coming 𝘄𝗵𝗲𝗻 𝘀𝗵𝗲 𝗰𝗮𝗺𝗲 home.

A thief broke in at night.

But Jadoo was awake, so we 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝘆 were able to catch the thief.

Score: B+

Tips)
• Jadoo의 이야기이므로 “I, me, we”보다 Jadoo, she, they를 쓰는 것이 좋아요.
• “when she came home”은 “그녀가 집에 왔을 때”라는 뜻이에요.
• 사건의 순서가 잘 나타나 있어서 이야기를 이해하기 쉬워요!
• 도둑을 어떻게 잡았는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!

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