[David] Monday Euphony Presentation – Dora

[한동욱_David]

The main [division] – Accent is not strong enough. You need to exaggerate you sounds and put stronger stress in this word.

Black [c]louds – [C] consonant is mispronounced.

Comp[le]ted their [preparation] – It sounds like Busan dialect. Put stronger and more accurate accent. Check it on the audio and your own video as well.

[Stre]ngth – These sounds are unclear and sound murky. [tr] normally pronounced like [ch] sounds.

South-[eastern] – This sound is pronounced in the wrong way.

Swa[r]m – Based on the context, you have to exaggerate the meaning of this word and give stronger accent.

Climed up – [L] consonant is mispronounced so, for me, it sounds like [crime].

Hello, an avid student Dora.

Your disarming smile on the face and powerful voice always attracts others.

I hope you not to lose your this priceless asset.

For this time, I came to know that you can be better off if you practice strong accent.

Overall, monotonous intonation and relatively accent is abating your presentation.

Please practice with audio file, and only focus on its accent.

Then I believe that you will be able to make natural sounds.

Thank you again for your efforts, Dora!

Keep you momentum going on~!