<p>I think this topic is important <s>Because</s> <b>because</b> this story <s>want say</s> <b>wants to say</b> maybe <b>if</b> you give up you can't <s>success</s> <b>succeed</b>. I think this sentence is very important <b>in</b> our <s>life</s> <b>lives</b> so <s>l</s> <b>I</b> make this sentence my motto because if we give up quickly we can't accomplish our <s>object</s> <b>objective</b>. The first line of the topic was "People usually see achievement, not their process"~~ this~~ <b>. This</b> sentence <s>feels look</s> <b>feels</b> <s>same</s> <b>similar to</b> my life so <s>l</s> <b>I</b> will <s>see</s> <b>observe</b> <s>a</s> <b>the</b> process of successful people.</p><p>Score: B+</p><p>Tips)</p><ol style="list-style-type: decimal;" data-ke-list-type="decimal"><li>Add an example of a successful person you admire.</li><li>Explain how you plan to use this motto in your daily life.</li><li>Think about a time when you didn't give up. How did it make you feel?</li></ol>
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