This story was about The Green Frog Commotion.
First, Jadoo's mom, Mimi**,** and Baby went to the market.
Then, Jadoo went to the matket 𝗺𝗮𝗿𝗸𝗲𝘁 because mom asked to her 𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗺𝗼𝗺 𝗮𝘀𝗸𝗲𝗱 𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝘁𝗼 𝗴𝗼.
But the market was closed.
Next, Jadoo was so angry.
Next that 𝗔𝗳𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁, a theif 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝗲𝗳 came in 𝗶𝗻𝘁𝗼 their house.
In the end, Jadoo caught the theif 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝗲𝗳.
I think this story was funny.
Score: A
Tips)
• “go to the market”처럼 장소 앞에는 to를 써요.
• “thief”는 “도둑”이라는 뜻이에요. 철자를 잘 기억해요!
• “After that”은 이야기 순서를 이어 줄 때 쓰는 표현이에요.
• First, Then, Next, In the end를 사용해서 이야기 순서를 아주 잘 나타냈어요!
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