I think this story covers a very important topic in modern society. Anonymity allows people to express their opinions without hesitation, but it also causes injury of increases the risk of committing wrong actions or harming others. Individuals may have different ideas and experiences on this issue. However, I'm opposed to online anonymity. Still, I want to find out how to stay anonymous and not commit the wrong actions.
Score: B+
Tips:
- Expand on the reasons why you are opposed to online anonymity and provide examples.
- Reflect on the balance between the benefits and drawbacks of anonymity in online spaces.
- Consider discussing ways to promote responsible behavior while maintaining anonymity.
- Ensure proper sentence structure and clarity (e.g., "increases the risk of committing wrong actions" instead of "causes injury of committing wrong actions").
- Use correct transitions to improve sentence flow (e.g., "Still" instead of "However" when continuing the same idea).
- Simplify and clarify sentences for better readability (e.g., "Anonymity allows people to express their opinions without hesitation" instead of "Anonymity allows people to express their opinions without hesitation, but it also causes injury of committing wrong actions or harming others").