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Lead: I met a girl who was very cute and is a young.
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Where: I met a girl who was very cute and is a young at her home in seoul
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How: I met a girl who was very cute and is a young at her home in seoul with my friend named Ahn
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When: I met a girl who was very cute and is a young at her home in seoul with my friend named Ahn the day before yesterday.
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Situation: The girl's grandmom gave us some bread and coffee which was really taste good.
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Result: We had a good time eating some food with talking about one's favorites together in her room.
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Feel: I was happy to meet her, because her interest was similar to that of my younghood. that fact made me interested.
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Will: I will meet her again next time. it was really good time.
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I met a girl who was very cute and is a young at her home in seoul with my friend named Ahn the day before yesterday. The girl's grandmom gave us some bread and coffee which was really taste good. We had a good time eating some food with talking about one's favorites together in her room. I was happy to meet her, because her interest was similar to that of my younghood. that fact made me interested. I will meet her again next time. it was really good time.
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첫댓글 Oh~ your writing is getting better~~
Keep going ~~
Keep going :D