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  • 21.11.24 14:52

    첫댓글 ★★★ You have room for improvement ★★★

    1. when i am stress
    → when i am stressed
    → when i am under stress

    2. my head is refresed
    → my mind gets refreshed

    3. things i have not progressed can be solve more easily than before
    → worries i have for days just go away

    4. before 단어 발음 체크

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