Re: Jamse 자두

[Teacher Winget]

In the morning, Jadoo ate coffee and bread 𝗱𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗸 𝗰𝗼𝗳𝗳𝗲𝗲 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝗯𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱 with Minji.

Jadoo gave bread to Eunhee, but Eunhee spat it out.

Throughout the class, Eunhee was bothered by Strawberry 𝗗𝗱𝗮𝗹𝗴𝗶.

After school, Eunhee tried to apologize to Ddalgi, but inside the bakery there was Jadoo 𝗝𝗮𝗱𝗼𝗼 𝘄𝗮𝘀 𝗶𝗻𝘀𝗶𝗱𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗯𝗮𝗸𝗲𝗿𝘆.

Eunhee badmouthed her friend and Strawberry’s 𝗗𝗱𝗮𝗹𝗴𝗶’𝘀 bakery.

Her friend reported Strawberry's 𝗗𝗱𝗮𝗹𝗴𝗶’𝘀 shop.

But Ddalgi’s bakery was clean.

Score: A-

Tips)
• 커피는 먹는 것이 아니라 마시는 것이므로 drank coffee라고 써요.
• 사람 이름은 처음부터 끝까지 같은 이름으로 써요.
• 문장의 순서가 잘 연결되어 있어서 이야기를 이해하기 쉬워요.
• 마지막에 Eunhee가 어떻게 느꼈는지 쓰면 이야기가 더 완성돼요!