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The wristwatch is one of the most popular accessories in the world.
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The history of the wristwatch began in 1275 with the invention of the mechanical clock.
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In 1540, Jewelers suddenly lost their jobs, so many became clock makers clockmakers.

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Over the next few centuries, wristwatches became popular among peoples people.

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In 1970, the first digital wristwatch was introduced.
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In the future, new wristwatches will make our lives even easier.
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