<p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">Q: what did you do yesterday?</span></strong></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;"> </span></strong></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">Lead: I ate raw fish.</span></strong></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">Where: I ate raw fish at restaurant.</span></strong></p><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><strong>How: I ate raw fish at </strong><strong>restaurant</strong><strong> with my family.</strong></span></p><p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><strong>When: I ate raw fish at </strong><strong>restaurant </strong><strong>with my family yesterday.</strong></span></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;"> </span></strong></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">Situation: There were a lot of raw fish on the table that looks yummy.</span></strong></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">Result: The raw fish was so yummy.</span></strong></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">Feeling: I was very happy because i like raw fish.</span></strong></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">Will: I will eat pork next time. I love meat.</span></strong></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;"> </span></strong></p><p><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">After Revising</span></strong></p><p> </p><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><p><strong>I ate raw fish at restaurant with my family yesterday. </strong><strong>There were a lot of raw fish on the table that looks yummy.</strong><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;"> The raw fish was so yummy.</span></strong><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;"> I was very happy because i like raw fish.</span></strong><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;"> I will eat pork next time. I love meat.</span></strong></p></span><p> </p><p><strong><font size="5"></font></strong> </p>
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첫댓글 You must be happy, because you ate delicious raw fish.