<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>What did you do last Sunday?</STRONG></SPAN></P>
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<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><SPAN><STRONG>Lead : I took a walk.</STRONG></SPAN></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><SPAN></SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>Where : I took a walk in the park.</STRONG></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>How : I took a walk in the park with my puppy.</STRONG></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>When : I took a walk in the park with my puppy last Sunday.</STRONG></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>Situation : There were a lot of people who were taking a wal, too. They looked very excited.</STRONG></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>Result : I took a walk for one hour that made me happy.</STRONG></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>Feeling : I was very happy, because I took a walk with my puppy that looked exciting, too.</STRONG></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>Will : I will take a walk every day.</STRONG></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG></STRONG></SPAN> </P>
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<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"></SPAN><STRONG><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"></SPAN></STRONG><STRONG><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"></SPAN></STRONG><STRONG><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"></SPAN></STRONG></P>
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<P><STRONG><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt">After Revising </SPAN></STRONG></P>
<P><STRONG><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"></SPAN></STRONG></P>
<P><STRONG><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt">I took a walk in the park with my puppy last Sunday.</P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>There were a lot of people who were taking a wal, too. They looked very excited.</STRONG></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>I took a walk for one hour that made me happy.</STRONG></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>I was very happy, because I took a walk with my puppy that looked exciting, too.</STRONG></SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt"><STRONG>I will take a walk every day.</STRONG></SPAN></P></SPAN></STRONG>
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첫댓글 I think it is really good for your health.
Keep going~~