Re: Read it!(Luna)

[Teacher1]

The title of this book is 'The journey of three bottles'. Three bottles wee were laied laid i in the store. One day the one bottle bought was bought by a boy. But it he trashed at it in the trash can. The bottle goes went to the landfill then it where it was going to break down for a long time. Second The second bottle was bought by a man. The man trashed the bottle in near the river. The bottle flew in to into the ocean and it sicked made the animals sick. Last The last bottle was bought by a young girl. The girl trashed the bottle in to into the recycling bin. It was taken to the recycling plant and it be became the plastic pellets to make a new product. I think the every people person had has to trash the bottles and etc in to into the recycling bin.

Score: B+

Tips:

1. Use "First," "Second," and "Third" to start each bottle's story.
2. Explain why recycling is important for the environment.
3. Add how long it takes for plastic to break down in landfills.
4. Describe what kinds of animals can be harmed by plastic in the ocean.
5. Give examples of new products that can be made from recycled plastic.