Hello Bolt~!
Welcome to Autumn’s Monday Euphony class !!!^_^!!!
For the most
part, your presentation was great. For your better improvement, let me give you
some comments as follows.
1) Pronunciation (Check the sound of it at www.m-w.com)
[origin] – put accent
on /o/
[teacher],
[pressed], water - /r/ sound is a bit weak
[food], [created] –
you missed ending sound
[today] – make /t/
sound short
[practitioner] –
it was unclear. Check it out!
[period] – it’s hard
to catch /i/ sound
[spiritual] – it was
unclear. Listen to the audio file.
[various] - /v/
sound is weak
When you practice to change your pronunciation,
read a book slowly with audio file.
2) Accent & Intonation &Voice & Manner
Your powerful
voice is enough to draw audiences’ attention! Just I hope you to make your
speed a bit fast.
3) Mission
Focus on changing your
pronunciation