학교 영어숙제로 축구에관한 저널을 써봤는데 봐주세용 ㅋㅋ

[미예녀★]

내일 대학교 영어회화시간에 숙제 낼려고 썼는데

아무거나 써도 된다고해서 썼는데 이정도면 될까요?;;

            <Homework>    student number:2010413082  Name: Hyun Ju Young

Topic:  journal about soccer.

 Soccer is famous sports around the world.
 we can watch a soccer machs of EPL on the TV.
 EPL is England's soccer league and most popular league around the world.
 we can find a origin of soccer in antiquity period.
 but antiquity's ball game is not perfact form of soccer.
 when Roma empire attacked England, ball playing was spreaded in England.
 at the 12 century in England soccer started  that had a today's rules and forms
 and so on...
 other things that have made EPL famous are popular plyers, good marketings and responses
 of fans.
 hooligans are widely-known because they create mayhem on the street after the soccer match.
 sometimes thet have a fierce battle with opposite team's supporters.
 so policemans always stand by hooligans around the stadium.
 soon world's festival, The World Cup takes place in South africa.
 as soon as i want to enjoy the festival with my friends and family.
 
 
 

[꼬마와친해지기]

여자분이세여?

[미예녀★]

네

[꼬마와친해지기]

여자가 축구로 발표하면 졸라 귀엽겠다ㅡㅡ.... 인기도 오르시겠네요 축하;

[Ajax Scouter]

난 이정도도 못쓰는데..ㅜ.ㅜ

[HugoBoss]

헉 수준높다 어느대학교 무슨과?

[미예녀★]

저 서경대학교 미용예술학과에요 ㅋㅋ

[HugoBoss]

헐 근데 되게 잘하시네요.. 학교가 안좋다는게 아니라;; 저런것도 시키나요?

[미예녀★]

시키네요 ㅠ

[...ioi...]

perfact이거혹시 퍼펙트 perfect 이거 아닌가여?ㅋ ㅋ ㅋ

[몰닉]

plyers 오타가 몇개 있네요