리드 : I went to shopping.
장소 : I went to shopping at the market.
방법 : I went to shopping with my mother.
시간 : I went to shopping with my mother yesterday.
상황 : At the shop, I thought about a present which
my sister Eun-jin likes.
Because January 18th is her birthday.
I said to my mom,
"What do you think about great present?"
She said,"l don't know."
Finally I bought a couple of color sockes.
I think this is a great idea.
Because this is a couple of sockes.
And it was very warm.
It can use only winter.
That was very colorful.
On the way home, I bought lots of chocolate
milk which was fresh.
Because Eun-jin likes chocolate milk very much.
결과 : And now I 'm full because I drank 2 chocolate
milk.
느낌 : I'm very satisfied with socks because it's perfect
that is warm and colorful.
의지 : I will held a great party for Eun-jin.
And I will give her which I bought.
When I had a birthday party, l was very happy,
Because l got a lot of gifts that made me happy.
첫댓글 글이 매끄러운 느낌이 드네요. ㅎㅎ 제 수준으로는 틀린 것이 보이지 않슴당~ 좋은 하루 되삼~ㅎㅎ;;;;
나라언니짱 쫌 아이디가 영 아니네요....
sockes-->socks^^