<p>This story was about <s>valentine's Day</s> 𝗩𝗮𝗹𝗲𝗻𝘁𝗶𝗻𝗲’𝘀 𝗗𝗮𝘆.</p><p>Jadoo went to school.</p><p>In the <s>class room,Doldol</s> 𝗰𝗹𝗮𝘀𝘀𝗿𝗼𝗼𝗺, 𝗗𝗼𝗹𝗱𝗼𝗹 and <s>anorher friends</s> 𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗳𝗿𝗶𝗲𝗻𝗱𝘀 gave Jadoo <s>the</s> water.</p><p><s>Boy was gat many chocolate.</s> 𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝗯𝗼𝘆𝘀 𝗴𝗼𝘁 𝗺𝗮𝗻𝘆 𝗰𝗵𝗼𝗰𝗼𝗹𝗮𝘁𝗲𝘀.</p><p>Jadoo didn't give her chocolate <b>to</b> <s>another boy</s> 𝗮𝗻𝘆 𝗯𝗼𝘆.</p><p>Jadoo ate her chocolate.</p><p>I think this story was fun.</p><p>Score: B+</p><p>Tips)<br>• “classroom”은 한 단어로 써요.<br>• “got”은 “get”의 과거형이에요.<br>• “give something to someone”은 “누구에게 무엇을 주다”라는 뜻이에요.<br>• Jadoo가 왜 초콜릿을 직접 먹었는지 쓰면 이야기가 더 재미있어요!</p>
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