첫댓글Hello Will, Thank you very much for sharing an interesting audio file with us. Watching your video clip got me thinking that your general intonation and pronunciation become way more accurate than before :-0 I believe it is the result of your hard work and sweat! I hope you to keep pressing on your study and for your further improvement, I would now like to point out two small mistakes as follows.
Some words were unclear. , a stream that floats into a river -> , a stream that flows into a river. [vortex] -> This word was in lack of enough stress. Try to put stronger stress on it than now.
Will, thank you again for delivering the presentation. I hope what I wrote down will help you. If you have any questions regarding the comments above, feel free to ask me. I am all ears.
첫댓글 Hello Will,
Thank you very much for sharing an interesting audio file with us.
Watching your video clip got me thinking that your general intonation and pronunciation become way more accurate than before :-0 I believe it is the result of your hard work and sweat! I hope you to keep pressing on your study and for your further improvement, I would now like to point out two small mistakes as follows.
Some words were unclear.
, a stream that floats into a river -> , a stream that flows into a river.
[vortex] -> This word was in lack of enough stress. Try to put stronger stress on it than now.
Will, thank you again for delivering the presentation. I hope what I wrote down will help you.
If you have any questions regarding the comments above, feel free to ask me. I am all ears.
From, Brian
Thank you!! Brian!!