Re:TJ's writing : what whould be your life 10 years from now?

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      What would be your life 10 years from now?

Honestly, it's so difficult for me to predict my life after 10 years from now because I've changed plans for the future many times throughout my whole life. Nevertheless, I'm partially able to imagine that I would live in Australia with permanent visa. My major is theology, but I can't ensure I'll become a pastor straightaway, for I have a desire to experience much bigger world than my place, Republic of Korea.

My new plan in Australia that would be started in March next year is

going to be my first step to achieve that.

My new plan would be started in March next year in Australia and it will be going the first step to achieve that goal.

In a nutshell, by the time I'm 34 years old,

                      by the time I will turn into 34 years old

 I would immigrate to Australia doing something I'm passionate about.

  to Australia and do something where I’m passionate about

Comment:

     I’m glad how open you are in your goal in life. So far, your opinion and thought about the topic was almost there. I just fixed few sentences so that we can understand what you really trying to say. I try to arrange it and put some word because you leave the sentences hanging. Over all its good and keep it up!