baseball player

[강민성]

I played soccer at my school with my friends yesterday.There were many fans who were white shirts.They were dancing and singing that made me excited.One of my friends '민성' looked happy too.Because he was a big fan of soccer.Actually we used to play soccer on the school ground which is big.We spent happy time because it made me stress out.I made 2 goals in the game that we won.Many students celebrated our team that made our team members very excited.It was very hard to play the game that my position was a striker.Finally we won 5 to 3.When I made a goal, meay people gave a big hand. In fact we practiced a lot after school.That's why we won the game. If we do all our best, we can win all the matches. I was very happy becasue I won the game and made 2 goals. I could win the game because of  my 2 goals .When I made 2 goals, I felt flying to the sky. At that time, I heard many friends shouting with joy. One of my friends '정환' looked very happy too. He danced and sang a song for us. I realized that our team made a lot of people happy by winning the game. I want to win many games possible because I can make people happy.I will play baseball next time, because I like baseball too. In fact, My favorite sport is baseball which I want to play baseball every day that makes me excited all the time.Actually I want to be a baseball player like 'RHJ' who is really famous in the world and earned a lot of money. I wnt to be a special player like him and earn a lot of money. I really want to be a baseball player and earn many money. I will do my best to be a famous baseball player in the world.

[김희경(Robin)]

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