Hello, Lan J This is your
assistants, Candice!
First of all,
thank you profusely for attending Monday Euphony class.
I
am confident about the fact that this class will work wonders for you!
No
worries.
Let
us count on our future with patience, distinctiveness, thrift and trust :)
In order to check the
room for improvement, 4 elements are as follows: Pronunciation, Stress,
Intonation and Manner.
1.
Pronunciation (check the
accurate pronunciation of it: www.m-w.com)
①
Great
and disorder – the [r] sound is weak!
②
Deeply,
plea and food – because of two vowels(a, e, i, o, u), the sound should be
lengthened.
③
Retarded
and enlightened – the ending sound is weak!
2.
Stress – Great!
3.
Intonation - Good, but how about making a wide range of pitch?
4.
Manner – you have a perfectly strong voice! Next time, try to
contact the audience, please J
Mission
– 1. The ending sound (-k, -ed)
2. [r] sound
3. Contact the audience
Lan, thank
you for sharing your presentation! Check your video clip and read comments thoroughly,
please~ Whenever you have any question, do not
hesitate and ask me, please >_<