Hello Bless!
First of
all, I would like to say thank you for taking my Monday Euphony class. And It
is my absolute pleasure to study with you.
Let me
intoduce the purpose of this class briefly. This class is expressly designed
for helping the presenters in terms of their pronunciation and stress of each
word, intonation of yours, manner on the stage and so on and so forth.
And here
are some constructive and helpful comments on your presetation. I hope the
comments might drive you to the betterment.
<Pronunciation> (If you are not sure about the sound of any
words of its kind, I recommend that make a visit to the following website, http://www.merriam-webster.com)
I found
several words in which I think you made a mistake.
“Ropes” starts with [R] but in your presentation the [R] sound was rarely heard. Plus, ‘Live’
has a minor problem. At the end of the sound of the word, there ought to be [V] sound, but the sound was barely
caught. And when you said ‘all’,
that sounds like the sound of Korean ‘올’.
However, it is a tad closer to Korean ‘얼’.
If you are not sure about the exact sound of the word, I would like to recommend
a helpful visit to the site noticed above. Lastly, at the last part of the
story, you tried to say ‘if you’, it sounded like you were saying ‘ip you’.
Please check this out in your video clip and keep this tip in mind.
<Stress>
Thanks to
your relentless efforts to put an accent on every single words, there is
nothing to be checked. Yet, I hope you to make stronger accents than you have
done.
<Intonation>
Intonation of
yours was good, but sometimes your lyrics tend to be cut word by word. In order
to fix this, I would like to say ‘Listen and read more than you have done.’
<Manner>
Your
voice is truly clear and beautiful enough, but it is the problem that your
voice is small. Compared with the voice of yours at moment I saw you for the
first time, it is way bigger. It is, however, still not so big. I want you to
raise it up. Here is another tip. Try not to use your hand while memorizing.
And this is your mission.
Thank you.
첫댓글 Thank you for commenting!!!! i try to fix my problem Thank you james!!!!!