This story was about Gold Ranger Jadoo.
First, Jadoo and Jo-young wanted to meet gold ranger 𝗚𝗼𝗹𝗱 𝗥𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿.
Then, Doldol showed a ticket for 𝗮 𝘁𝗶𝗰𝗸𝗲𝘁 𝘁𝗼 Jadoo and Jo-young.
Next, they competed for the ticket.
Then, Doldol picked Jo-young to meet gold ranger/ 𝗚𝗼𝗹𝗱 𝗥𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿.
In the end, Jadoo interrupted 𝘀𝗻𝗲𝗮𝗸𝗲𝗱 𝗶𝗻 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗷𝗼𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗱 Doldol, Jo-young, and another people 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗽𝗲𝗼𝗽𝗹𝗲.
I think this story was fun.
Score: A+
Tips)
• 사람 이름인 “Gold Ranger”는 첫 글자를 대문자로 써요.
• “show something to someone”은 “누구에게 무엇을 보여 주다”라는 뜻이에요.
• “sneaked in”은 “몰래 들어갔다”라는 뜻이에요.
• First, Then, Next, In the end를 사용해서 이야기 순서를 아주 잘 썼어요!