<p>This story was about Gold <s>ranger</s> 𝗥𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿 and Jadoo.</p><p>Jadoo and <s>Jo young want ticket</s> 𝗝𝗼-𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗴 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘁𝗶𝗰𝗸𝗲𝘁, and Doldol had <b>the</b> ticket.</p><p>Jadoo <s>give snack</s> 𝗴𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝗗𝗼𝗹𝗱𝗼𝗹 𝗮 𝘀𝗻𝗮𝗰𝗸, and <s>Joyoung give bidio game</s> 𝗝𝗼-𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗴 𝗴𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝗵𝗶𝗺 𝗮 𝘃𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗼 𝗴𝗮𝗺𝗲.</p><p><s>Joyoung</s> 𝗝𝗼-𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗻𝗴 and Doldol saw Gold <s>ranger</s> 𝗥𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿.</p><p>Jadoo <s>come in Gold ranger</s> 𝘀𝗻𝗲𝗮𝗸𝗲𝗱 𝗶𝗻 𝘁𝗼 𝘀𝗲𝗲 𝗚𝗼𝗹𝗱 𝗥𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿.</p><p>Jadoo <s>slept</s> 𝗳𝗲𝗹𝗹 𝗮𝘀𝗹𝗲𝗲𝗽.</p><p>I think this story was fun.</p><p>Score: B+</p><p>Tips)<br>• 과거 이야기이므로 “wanted, gave”처럼 과거형을 써요.<br>• “give”의 과거형은 “gave”예요.<br>• “video game”의 철자를 잘 기억해요.<br>• Jadoo가 몰래 들어갔지만 잠이 든 마지막 장면까지 잘 썼어요!</p>
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