Re:TJ's writing : Is it necessary for the royal family to have a royal wedding? Give at least 3 reasons

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 Is it necessary for the royal family to have a royal wedding? Give at least 3 reasons

It seems to me that the royal family doesn't need to have a royal wedding anymore.

First of all, contrary to medieval age, these days nobody think that the royal family has authority to control

                                                    ages

people through a royal wedding. British is the country governed by the Prime Minister not royal blood.

                                          British were a country who                                   not the royal

.

Secondary, marriage with a relative is more likely to cause birth defects. Through genetical reason, the baby

Second,                                                                                                                       genetic

who was born in intermarriage family is much weaker than normal one and easily dies.

Lastly, as one of citizens in democracy society, royal family also has freedom to chose their lover  everywhere

                 of the               democratic                                     has the freedom     choose     

 in the world. Even if they want to marry a person who is not royal blood, they must be guaranteed to chose

                                                               who doesn’t have a                                                      choose

 lover who they sincerely want, for they have human rights as other citizens.

/someone/                                                                       same with the ordinary citizens.

The bottom line is, the royal wedding is just one of the heritages of British tradition. So, royal family doesn't 

                                                                                                                                                       families

have to get an obligation to intermarry relatives.   

Comments:

             Hello there! Good job! You only have few corrections. Kindly observed to + (base form) of the verb and articles in the sentences. Over all, I got your opinion and thought about the marriage for the royal blood. Marriage doesn’t matter to the same class or level in life but instead, the sincerity for someone. It was very well sense!