Re:TJ's writing : What actions must the government do for the unemployed citizens in your country?

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     What actions must the government do for the unemployed citizens in your country?|

As far as I concerned, the government has to reduce the number of universities and increase technical schools so as to solve this unemployment problem happening in current Korea society. Since most students enter a college, they want to get only white-color jobs(such

                     Mostly                  who enter colleges want

as government officers, doctors, lawyers, and so forth) that there are almost no opening

                                                                                                 and almost no vacancies left 

left in this kind of job fields . So, if the government encourages young people to get

blue-color jobs (such as technician, fieldworker, etc.), it would help to solve this

unemployment crisis. Even though they can make lots of money and feel worth by doing blue-color jobs, most of them hesitate to get into this job field due to the negative

                                                                                this kind of  job

atmosphere  about it in Korea society. I'm so sad to know the fact. Now we should change

                                                                                                        fact in choosing a job.

 our mind. Every job is valuable. There are no jobs that is useless.

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Comment:

 Great suggestion! I know you can relate this kind of situation in your country. And this is one of the problems which are facing in Korea nowadays. I hope the government will take some

actions for this growing unemployment crisis in your country. So far, same as usual you’ve got

only few corrected sentences. Thumbs up! J