Re: 2A 027 (Jia)

[Sub Tutor 3]

The title of this book is 'Natural Wonder, the Great Barrier Reef.'

The Great Barrier Reef off the coast of Australia is one of the most amazing natural wonders on Earth. Many people have wrecked their ships in shallow waters. There are 600 different types of corals. Although you can't see them move, corals are actually living animals. Thousands of different animal species live around the Great Barrier Reef. Many tourists go scuba diving and snorkeling there to see the coral, colorful fish, jellyfish, turtles, whales, and dolphins.
I think that if I go to Australia, I would want to go there.

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Grade: B+

Tips:

• The text provides good information but could be improved by adding more details about why the reef is important or how it can be protected.
• Try to be consistent with capital letters, especially for proper nouns like "Great Barrier Reef."
• The conclusion could be stronger by expressing a more specific reason for wanting to visit the reef.