<p> </p><p><b>The title of this book is</b> <b>'Natural Wonder, the Great Barrier Reef.'</b> The Great Barrier Reef <b>is located</b> off the coast of eastern <b>Australia</b>. It spreads <b>across</b> almost 350,000 square kilometers and contains numerous reefs and islands. It was seen by Europeans for the first time in the 1700s. Many sea animals, <b>including</b> coral and whales, <b>live</b> in this reef. Unfortunately, it is becoming vulnerable because of <b>overfishing</b>, oil spills, and the changing climate. However**,** researchers study changes in the ecosystem and <b>teach</b> people how to keep it safe. We should preserve this <b>valuable</b> and beautiful piece of the ocean. I want to <b>go snorkeling there to see</b> turtles and whales when I <b>grow</b> up.</p><p> </p><hr data-ke-style="style1"><p><b>Grade: B+</b></p><p><b>Tips:</b></p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li>The content is informative and well-organized, but watch out for spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., "Austrailia" should be "Australia" and "teech" should be "teach").</li><li>Adding a bit more detail about the specific threats to the reef and how people can help protect it would make the text stronger.</li><li>The conclusion is good, but it could be enhanced by explaining why seeing turtles and whales would be exciting for you.</li></ul>
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