Re: 2A 027(Luna)

[Sub Tutor 3]

The title of this book is "Natural Wonder, the Great Barrier Reef."

The Great Barrier Reef was named a World Heritage Site in 1981. It has 2,900 reefs and 900 islands. Australia's aboriginals have been fishing there for thousands of years.

The reef is home to more than 600 different types of corals. Corals are actually living animals.

Many animals live in the Great Barrier Reef. For example, coral, colorful fish, jellyfish, turtles, whales, and dolphins.

Climate change and warming water temperatures also make the reef vulnerable.

I think this story is interesting, and I want to go to the Great Barrier Reef.

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Grade: B+

Tips:

• Good effort! Be careful with spelling and small grammar mistakes.
• The structure of your writing is clear, but you could add more details about why the Great Barrier Reef is important and why you find it interesting. This would help strengthen your conclusion.