(목동김상철토플전문학원) 김혜빈 독립형 WT # 4 Compared to the people living in the cities, the people living

#4 Compared to the people living in the cities, the people living in the rural areas can take better care of their families or children.   Over the past few decades, many large cities have risen from rural areas. So, it’s been argued whether people living in the cities can take better care of their families or children than those living in the countryside. Some people might say that people living in the city can take better care of their family members because there are better facilities, while others might not think so. However, I am deeply convinced that people living in the rural areas can take way better care of their families or children than those living in urban areas. Actually, I have a couple of reasons to support my opinion and will explain and develop them in the next following paragraphs below.   First and foremost, it’s easier for people in the countryside to protect their family members. Ironically, the countryside is much safer than big cities nowadays. This is because rural areas aren’t crowded with various and unfamiliar people, while big cities consist of diverse people who are unpredictable. Also, you can have a close bond with neighbors in rural areas, so it’s much easier to keep an eye on your family members, especially young children, through their help. Though some people might say that big cities are safer because they have tighter security patrols and cameras everywhere, this is because there’s a lot of dangerous people in the cities. To give a first handed experience as an example of this, when I was living in the city, my parents were very protective in terms of my safety. This was because I lived in a neighborhood that had blinding city lights every night, with various people enjoying dangerous or unpredictable activities. Also, since there were so many strangers, my parents had no way of keeping an eye on my whenever I went outside. Though my neighborhood had many police officers around and numerous security cameras, many tended to be kidnapped, mugged or even harmed in the middle of the streets. However, when I moved to a small town in the countryside, it was much easier for my parents to take care of me and my siblings. It was less crowded with strangers, and I was able to know almost everyone living in the neighborhood. Also, since my town is small, it became easier for my parents to exactly know where I am when I’m outside. So, through this experience, I learned that taking care of family and children is way easier for people living in rural areas than urban ones.   Moreover, people living in the countryside have a better environment for health. These days, big cities are causing various kinds of diseases among people. This is because it’s not only not sanitized but also highly polluted. So in terms of taking care of beloved family members and children, living in rural areas is better for their health. Though some people might say that cities have various kinds of medical or even educational facilities and academies that are better than those of rural areas, this is not totally true in all cases. For instance, nowadays, the government is distributing many workers into rural areas in order to prevent cities from becoming more polluted. By distributing high-quality medical and educational facilities to the countryside, more people would have fewer reasons to stay in the city. Also, many types of research have proven that children living in the countryside have better health because the natural environment that they live in is very clean, and they have less chances in having a pandemic because diseases don’t spread as quickly as they do in the city. So, it’s conclusive that it’s more beneficial and easier for you to take care of your family members in rural areas than urban ones.