The book's title is <s>wind</s> "Wind and <s>red</s> Little <s>rabbit</s> Rabbit". <s>today</s> Today <s>l</s> I introduce <s>about</s> this story**.** One day the wind was so mad <s>so</s> that rabbit <s>can't</s> couldn't sleep**.** <s>so</s> So rabbit tried to <s>said</s> talk to wind but wind didn't <s>said</s> say <s>everything</s> anything. She <s>think</s> thought of one idea**: this** is rabbit <s>go</s> goes far away <s>to</s> from wind**.** <s>so</s> So rabbit <s>run</s> ran quickly. Rabbit <s>cross</s> crossed the first hill but wind still <s>follow</s> followed rabbit**.** <s>so</s> So rabbit <s>go</s> went <s>run</s> running quickly but wind <s>is</s> was still following rabbit. Rabbit <s>jump</s> jumped over <s>tree,</s> trees, <s>forest,</s> through forests, and to the moon in the sky. Eventually <s>rbbit</s> rabbit <s>jump</s> jumped higher than wind**.** <s>but</s> But wind was not mad <s>but</s> and rabbit <s>misunderstand</s> misunderstood, so wind <s>feel</s> felt sad. <s>So</s> Now they live <s>in</s> on the moon**.** I think this book is fun but long.
Score: B-
Tips)
- Explain why the wind was mad at first.
- Describe how rabbit felt when jumping to the moon.
- Tell us what rabbit and wind do on the moon.
- Add more details about how wind tried to explain it wasn't mad.
- Think about a different ending. Do they become friends?