Independent writing -In a group,those who do not accept other's criticism cannot suceed

[T&A Big Fan]

In a group,those who do not accept other's criticism cannot suceed.Do you agree with the following statement?

 There are a lot of opinion's in this statement. From children, workers, students housekeeepers and more. In my opinion, those who do not accept other's criticism are impossible to suceed. It is really important for everyone and some people have stresses because of criticism from other people, but the more critcism the better.

 To start with, without other people's criticism, nobody can know what position they are in and what problem they have. This is very important to know because you can try to fix it so that you won't have to hear and accept more about it. For example, parents criticize their children's faults and makes them fix their problem.

 Furthermore, after accepting other people's criticism and fixing your problem, you may see other people's problems and help them criticize them too.You can help other people fix themselves and be a better person by first fixing yourself. Just like a teacher criticize students to have good manners in front of somebody and do their work properly.The student who accepts those words will eventually suceed.

 To conclude,if you don't accept other's advice and criticism, you will be the same stubborn person from the start and you'll have a bad reputation and bad ways of seing things.Also, there are many great people who suceeded by accepting other's criticsm. But you mustn't accept every criticism.Some of them might lead you astray and might confuse you destroying the things you fixed.