<p style="text-align: left;">This story is about Caillou making cookies. Caillou was quietly surprised by his mom, played quietly, then got hungry and wanted to eat some cookies, so he went to the kitchen. Caillou went to the kitchen and took out some flour, which he spilled as he took it out. So he was making cookies and she told him to clean them up because they were dirty. So Caillou cleaned out the kitchen with his mom and they made cookies together. And even when he went camping, he made cookies out of sand and showed them to his family. After reading this book, I found Caillou to be a really good and innocent child.</p>
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첫댓글This story is about Caillou making cookies. Caillou was (삭제: "quietly") surprised by his mom (추가: "while he was") playing quietly. (추가: "He") then got hungry and wanted to eat some cookies, so he went to the kitchen. (중복된 문장 삭제: "Caillou went to the kitchen") (삭제: "and") He took out some flour, which he spilled as he took it out. (삭제: "So he was making cookies and") His mom (추가: "His mom") told him to clean (추가: "it") up because (삭제: "they were") it was (변경: "they were dirty"를 "it was messy"로 변경) dirty (변경: "dirty"를 "messy"로 변경).
So Caillou cleaned (추가: "up") the kitchen with his mom('s help) (추가: "'s help") and they made cookies together. (추가: "Later,") (삭제: "And even") when he went (추가: "to the park") (삭제: "camping"), he (추가: "pretended to") made (변경: "made"를 "make"로 변경) cookies out of sand and showed them to his family. After reading this book, I found Caillou to be a really good and innocent child. (변경 사항 없음)
첫댓글 This story is about Caillou making cookies. Caillou was (삭제: "quietly") surprised by his mom (추가: "while he was") playing quietly. (추가: "He") then got hungry and wanted to eat some cookies, so he went to the kitchen. (중복된 문장 삭제: "Caillou went to the kitchen") (삭제: "and") He took out some flour, which he spilled as he took it out. (삭제: "So he was making cookies and") His mom (추가: "His mom") told him to clean (추가: "it") up because (삭제: "they were") it was (변경: "they were dirty"를 "it was messy"로 변경) dirty (변경: "dirty"를 "messy"로 변경).
So Caillou cleaned (추가: "up") the kitchen with his mom('s help) (추가: "'s help") and they made cookies together. (추가: "Later,") (삭제: "And even") when he went (추가: "to the park") (삭제: "camping"), he (추가: "pretended to") made (변경: "made"를 "make"로 변경) cookies out of sand and showed them to his family. After reading this book, I found Caillou to be a really good and innocent child. (변경 사항 없음)