The title of this cartoon is "Max & Ruby Camp Out."
At camp out, It was a heatwave day. it was a very hot day. Ruby suggested to sleeping sleeping in the tent. Max found a snake toy and a flashlight (why did he find the flash light?). He wanted to play outside. Max brought blankets to the tent, but he didn't want to sleep in the tent. Ruby suggested to gave giving him marshmallows. So Max even packed the tent with toys. In the end, Max slept at outside (how did he end up sleeping outside?).
Grade: B-
Tips:
- Use correct verb tenses (sleeping instead of to sleeping, giving instead of to gave).
- Make sure all sentences are complete and grammatically correct.
- Ensure clarity and consistency in sentences.
- Add more details to enhance the story.