Hello Dora! First of all, I am exceedingly delighted to see you in my Monday Euphony class.
Thank you for sharing your presentation with me and other students.
For the most part, your presentation was great. For your better improvement, let me give you some comments as follows.
1. Pronunciation (Access to http://www.merriam-webster.com/ and check it out)
Province: /i/sound is more
close /ㅡ/ than /ㅣ/.
Minister: second /i/ sound is
more close /ㅓ/ than /ㅣ/.
Falsely: /a/sound is close to /ㅓ/.
Had (stopped), his: Access to http://www.merriam-webster.com/ and check it out. Unnecessary /ㅡ/sound is pronounced at the end
of the words.
2. Accent & Intonation
& Voice (+ Manner)
Your dedication to mimic audio
file is found ^^!
But, Dora’s own intonation is
still found. Accent need to be clear and tone of voice needs to be diversified.
3. Mission
After listening to audio file,
record your voice while reading. And then compare the two files trying to find
subtle differences and try to make it corrected. (Your intonation is also good but
being able to make more diverse and native like sound is needed. )
첫댓글 Violet, thank you for ur caring comments♥