Re: 2A.201.Grace.

[Teacher1]

Introduction:) The title of this book is "Let's go outside Go Out and play Play". So, please listen carefully.

Text:) One winter day, Danny want wanted to go outside and play with her his dog. But mom says said "It's cold outside." But Danny want wanted to go outside. So, mom says said "annimals animals sleep during long winter day the long winter days". Danny says said "why?" So, mom says told a long story. Mom says said "bear bears and ant ants and snake snakes and several annimal animals is are sleeping during winter. "How?" Danny says said. mom is replaied Mom replied, "Ant Ants and some annimals animals prepared prepare before comes winter comes. Because when it comes winter comes, they have prepared something to eat and live . with."

Conclusion:) Lastly mom end ended the story. Danny is was so interested and says said " let's Let's go outside!!!".

Score: C+

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1. 동물들이 겨울잠을 자는 이유를 더 자세히 설명해보세요.
2. 대니가 밖에 나가고 싶어한 이유를 써보세요.
3. 엄마가 설명한 다른 동물들의 예를 더 추가해보세요.
4. 과거 시제를 사용할 때는 동사의 형태에 주의하세요. 예를 들어, 'says'를 'said'로, 'want'를 'wanted'로 바꿔야 해요.