"Do you have a fancy pencilcase?"

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I bought a pencil.

I bought a pencil at the store.

I bought a pencil at the store with my cute

sister  M.Y

I bought a pencil at the store with  my cute

sister  M.Y  last week.

There were a lot of

 school supplies that  I  like .

It was very fancy . I could put a lot of

school supplies in it, such as a

pencil, an eraser and a ruler.

I was very happy, because I bought

a fancy pencil  that I like

I will buy some other school

school supplies next time

    (After Rivising)

I bought a pencil at the store with  my cute sister  M.Y  last week.

There were a lot of school supplies that  I  like .

It was very fancy . I could put a lot of

school supplies in it, such as a

pencil, an eraser and a ruler.

I was very happy, because I bought

a fancy pencil  that I like.

I will buy some other school

school supplies next time

[Robin]

Hi~ How are you doing? It's your first article~~ Do your best and I want to read your articles ~~~

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이히!ㅋㅋ good! ^^

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나두....이히! good

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다~~좋은데 상황만 길게 늘려주었으면.......

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야 그래도 넘 잘했지 않냐??

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그래,잘 했다.어쩔래.

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동생이 귀엽나보죠.이름이 뭔가요?

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^^ 저의 동생 이름은. 김민영입니다.^^