Re: 2A 201 Austin

[Teacher1]

The book's title is "Sniffy the Traveling Field Mouse". Today I introduce this story. Let's go!

He ran across the field as fast as he could and he liked being alone. He dug under the oak's tree roots and entered so he felt cozy. He ate oil in his grandma's kitchen. He ate oil with rice. He wanted to go beyond the horizon so he went there. He got his fashion possessions and went many times but the horizon didn't get closer. He became tired so he relaxed and ate food and it became dark so he saw stars in the dark sky. Next day, weather was very strange so it dangerous was dangerous but he didn't give up. He went and finally the sky became good. He saw another gray mouse. They went to the horizon together with many matter adventures and they went each separate routes and he thought I'm not alone.

I think this topic story is fun and good.

Score: B-

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