The title of the story is "Max and Ruby."
Ep1:
Ruby put set up the tent and called the Max. Ruby says said, "Let's go outside." So Max found a flashlight and gave it to Ruby. Ruby flashed lit up the tent, and Ruby cause backpack she asked for a backpack. Max found a backpack and gave it to Ruby. Max repat repeated, "outside," but Ruby says said, "inside." (why were they saying that?) Max brings to brought pillows, but Max inside put toys inside the tent. Ruby went inside the house and found the marshmallows, but Max was all about the toys put the tent filled the tent with toys. So Ruby and Max slept outside.
I think this book is very funny.
Grade: B
Tips:
- Use the correct verb tenses (set up instead of put, said instead of says, brought instead of brings).
- Ensure clarity in your sentences.
- Make sure all sentences are complete and grammatically correct.