Re: 2A 202_Grace

[Teacher1]

In troduction:) The title of this book is "Where do they live?. ? This book's main character characters are Steven and , Mrs. Ruder, Tony, and Mary.

Body:) It's cleanup time. Mrs. Ruber Ruder called over the noisy voices the of the children. Mrs. Ruder walked around the classroom because as she checked how to how the children cleaning were cleaning. But Steven didn't attend to cleaning help clean the classroom. So, some a child yelled to the teacher says saying, "He didn't clean~~.!" Steven gave Mary a shove. So Mary cried. So, The teacher says said, "What's wrong?" . and they explained. after After, she talked about where she lived. She lived at in the an apartment building, and she lived~~. Everyone wanted to see her house. So, she invited them to her house later. Children knew who that they had to clean up.

Conclusion:) I think this book is talked talks about how everyone can should clean and someone had and someone no one has is and how being selfish is wrong.

Score: B+

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