Re: 2A 202 (Olivia)

[Teacher1]

The title of this story is "Where Do They Live?" One day, Mrs. Ruder said it's cleanup time. then Then, Mary cried because Steven gave Mary a shove. Steven asked why he had to clean, and Tony said because that Mrs. Ruder lived at school. Mrs~~.~~ Ruder smiled and told them she would explain her story. Actually, she didn't live at school. Everyone was surprised and asked where she lived. Mrs. Ruder said she lived at in the an apartment building with her husband and the her cat and the her dog. But Tony couldn't believe it, so he suggested going to Mrs. Ruder's apartment. I think children are pure.

Score: A-

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